Darren's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Zelda: UO Epis:8]

Great as always

You haven't let me down yet. The only thing I find disappointing about this series is that I know I can't animate that well...keep up the good work.

[LoL: Oh Yes And Spiders]

Great sprite animation

Seriously, you put other sprite animations to shame. And you know you've made a good flash cartoon when you can hold this many viewers' interest for 28 full minutes.

Emptygoddess responds:

I dunno. Some of them are pretty long and people seem to like them.

[Star Wars Fight III]

Heh..

It amused me. I suggest making it a little longer and adding a bit more randomness.

Noel-Ranger responds:

next one will be full of randomness

[Street Fighter - The Car]

Was it just me...

or was the sound out of sync?

[DBZ Beta - Pain]

Well

It's good, but it belongs on youtube.

[TF: Revenge of the Lolin']

Nicely done

Not your best drawings, but like you said it was done in a short time. The humor was good and mocked a lot of things that really, really, REALLY needed to be made fun of about that movie.

[It's Kirby!!]

Not bad.

I liked the animation, but it could have looked a bit more like Kirby's face and the music was loud. Besides that, good.

[Mecha Sonic's Wrath 2]

Keep trying

I think that the only real improvement was that I could actually read the words. I think you'd be better off having all the speech at the bottom, like in Super Mario Bros. Z. If you haven't seen those, then you should. They might help you improve some. Also, it seemed like the music stopped during sound effects. But the music choice was pretty good.

123brawltaunts123 responds:

ya i love super mario bros z, but i just got flash and im learning it so im trying a lot harder!!

[Sonic Band- Cochise]

Improve it or make something different

If it got blammed the first time you submitted it, don't submit it again unless it's much improved. You can't say that we aren't allowed to complain about the quality because you might as well make a terrible animation and say "you aren't allowed to say how terrible this is."

[Mecha Sonic's Wrath]

Um...

I don't think I could really improve on what flashman16 said, and link209163 also said basically the same thing. Watch some tutorials, use actual speech bubbles (filled with white), and try to use non-real backgrounds. That should improve it a lot.

123brawltaunts123 responds:

plz read the commentary
ITS ALOT BETTER ON YOUTUBE OK!!!!!!!!!