Darren's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Crown]

your waifu is trash

[James GK Performs It's Not a Toaster]

You should think about recording your singing and music separately. Your voice is really muffled.

[Earth]

The voice of a generation

[Papa's Cookies]

This is the review crew pick of my heart.

[Absolutely Garry's Mood - End of the Rope]

Is this any different from the last time you uploaded it?

[Jamaica-Man]

The writing needs more "show don't tell." All the dialogue very explicitly explains every last detail of what's going on, and comes off as unnatural exposition. Try to have the animation tell more of the story, or get across the information with more natural dialogue. I think you also know that the voices need some work, since you added the very necessary subtitles. You can find voice actors on newgrounds in the forums.

Rojay101 responds:

Thanks for your advice

[Epic Fail]

You can find voice actors under the Artists & Creators section of the Newgrounds forums.

hugofertre responds:

thank for your advice

[Monster VS StickMan]

When I saw the choice come up, I thought "oh cool, this is a choose your own adventure kinda thing" and was a little disappointed when it was just one choice. So, I'd recommend trying to making something longer with more choices, and a branching story, even if it's just a few choices total.

JohnCage1997 responds:

Yea, I was. In future if I had a big chance of free time, I'll try to improve myself and more interractivity (Inspired by TellTale Games.) since animating is one of my hobbies.

Thanks! Much appreciated! :D
ps. I like your flashes :3